First draft comments:
Alex: Too bland, I wanna know more, it should show what happened two them, it should show tell more of a story. I do like the broken heart in the middle.

Matti: I like th broken heart. I don’t like the arrows. Add some words to give the viewer some hints

Anna: The arrows seem cheesy, Add some guns and bullets. Some lyrics on the sside might be cool to show that they dissed eachother in rap songs.